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Rose De. Sommer
Chapter_One_Colorless
Rich Diamond Sommer and April Mar Sommer ruled a kingdom called Greenville. Greenville was a place, on planet Mobius, that had ever lasting fresh green grass, cold spring lakes, and trees that were covered in small water droplets. How does this happen? The King and Queen have gardeners and scientist to ensure that the land stays beautiful and safe. The King, was a tall, red, hedgehog that had brown hair and peach arms. He always wore a tuxedo and his royal green cape to honor the beauty of their kingdom.
  The Queen is an average sized female, blue hedgehog (her hair is blue too. Unlike her husband, her arms was the same color as the rest of her. She always wore a royal purple dress because to her, purple sparks creativity. She wears this along with her matching purple high heals, to represent the pain of the less fortunate.
The Mobians that live in the kingdom, loved their king and queen. Some were spreading rumors about them having children. The rumor event
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The Beauty Within A Woman (Sonamy) Chapter One Pg3
The green hedgehog closed the door behind him. His head, now, had a migraine from all the drama. He went downstairs to continue his paper work for the castle. Sure, they were overruled, but he was still one of the castle's finest secretary. He did all the paper work so that the "royals" can relax.
 Scourge sighed and reached for his black feathered quill. He started approving things that need approval, then started documenting about the troubles in the village. Suddenly, one of his ears twitched and he looked up. Sonic had come into the room; his eyes were dull as he stared in his uncle's eyes. Scourge got nervous from the way his nephew looked. Sonic didn't say anything, but Scourge knew by his stare that things won't be the same between them. "Sonic..." he started. "How are you feeling?"
 "You tell me. What does it look like?" Sonic replied.
 "Disappointment of not getting what you want."
 "You're the one that took it to far, you old drunk." Scourge flinched. Soni
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The Beauty Within A Woman (Sonamy) Chapter One Pg2
Scourge looked angrily at his nephew. The blue hedgehog looked down; ears flattened. He was afraid of his Uncle, at least when he's angry.
 "Sonic, I've told you a thousand times, and I will say it again, you can not go outside without me. You are Mobius's only hope to happiness. What would the people do if something were to happen to you?"
 "Uncle, you even said it yourself, there is no way I can take back the throne!"
 "But you can help your people."
 "The only thing that can help them is if the king was dead!" Sonic shouted. He regretted it quickly when his Uncle came after him. Sonic dodged his Uncle; making fall to the ground. Scourge looked back to his nephew; eyes full of rage met eyes of horror. Sonic quickly looked around the room for his shoes. Once he found them, he grabbed them and ran to the door. Sonic, then, suddenly felt pressure on his back; making him fall.
 "What the hell is wrong with you? I'm in charge of you and what I say goes!!" Sonic st
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Chapter_One_Colorless


Rich Diamond Sommer and April Mar Sommer ruled a kingdom called Greenville. Greenville was a place, on planet Mobius, that had ever lasting fresh green grass, cold spring lakes, and trees that were covered in small water droplets. How does this happen? The King and Queen have gardeners and scientist to ensure that the land stays beautiful and safe. The King, was a tall, red, hedgehog that had brown hair and peach arms. He always wore a tuxedo and his royal green cape to honor the beauty of their kingdom.
  The Queen is an average sized female, blue hedgehog (her hair is blue too. Unlike her husband, her arms was the same color as the rest of her. She always wore a royal purple dress because to her, purple sparks creativity. She wears this along with her matching purple high heals, to represent the pain of the less fortunate.

The Mobians that live in the kingdom, loved their king and queen. Some were spreading rumors about them having children. The rumor eventually reached the castle. Rich and April were considering this. They must give the people what they want.
  After months of waiting, the Queen had given birth to twin boys. One boy had flat brown hair, like his father, while the other had curly brown hair (the curls come from the mother). The kingdom rejoiced, and the castle held a huge ball to welcome the two princes'. There, they would announce the boys' names.


After an hour and a half of couples dancing, the music stopped and the King was at the top of the stairs, along with his Queen. Rich took one of the boys' from the mother's arms and raised him up. He was the one with flat brown hair and red fur. "Mobians of Greenville, one of my boys' that I have, in my hands, shall be named Ty Hunter Sommer. Like me, he has inherited plant powers, he can now use nature to help him whenever he needs it." The crowd of people cheered, whistled, and clapped. Rich put Ty back in April's arms and held up a hand, silencing everyone. Then, he grabbed his seconded son. This one, had brown curly hair and blue fur. "This one, shall be named Drew Bear Sommer. He has the power of strength. This was inherited by his grandfather on his mother's side. He can use this power, whenever it's necessary." The crowds once again cheered and went on with dancing, as the music played again.



After three years, April wanted to have a princess in the family. To make sure of this, Queen April snuck off the her husband's father. She begged him for a baby girl. He agreed only if he can have her first born girl. The Queen was shocked at this, but then she had in idea. She would agree, if she had twin girls'. He agreed and with a snap of his fingers, it was done. All that needed to happen, was to have the seed planted.
  Nine Months passed by. The Queen gave birth to two twin girls. They were both very similar. So, April gave a gold heart locket to one of them. It read "Rose" on it. Then, an argument was heard. April rushed into the room and saw her husband's father. She forgotten about the deal, until now. "Give me her right now, Son."
 "I don't know what you are talking about!! Leave now," said Rich.
 "Rich, I'm sorry. . .I didn't have a choice. . ." said April. "I made a deal with Salem." Salem evilly laughed. He rushed into the room where the girls' were. He smiled has he saw the gold locket and picked up Rose.  
 "This is the one. I'll be on my way now," said Salem. April got in the way.
 "I won't let you take her. She's mine."
 "But isn't that why you asked for twins? So, you could keep ONE?" Salem smirked as April looked down. Rich came to him and snatched Rose away. "Fine," said Salem. "I'll just destroy the life you once known. Have a good day." Salem walked off.






The kingdom was falling apart. Salem spread rumors about the deal. The Mobians hated Salem. Only, he said that they didn't care what happened to the people, as long as they keep Rose. The kingdom became afraid and rebelled against their king and queen. The started attacking everything until they reached the castle. "Those poor fools," Salem thought. Suddenly, color was being sucked from everything. When color gets sucked from a person, they are frozen in time, until color returns. That's what happened to all the citizens.


The King and Queen got away on horses. Their children were in baskets connected the saddles. One of the straps, connecting to one of the baskets, fell lose and made one of the baskets fall off in the middle of the woods. That baby was Rose. The horses kept on going. The King and Queen didn't even noticed. They kept going until they reached the other village. They went into hiding. April started to unstrap her babies, but realized that one of them was gone. She started running towards the woods, but Rich stopped her. "Are you crazy?! She's long gone."


Rose was crying the in the woods. Alone. Scared. She was about to become colorless. Until a fat man on a floating chair grabbed her from it. He flew her all the way to his metal base. Since she was a hedgehog, he had two plans in his head.

1. Make her a love interest for Sonic.
2. Make her a killing machine.

He liked the second one better. He picked up the baby, but she didn't like that. She froze him solid. Two robots in the background started to laugh.
Rose De. Sommer
I really wanted to make this. At first I was going to make a comic, but my hands get tired too easily. For now, it will be story form.
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Dear CobaltPie,


I am sorry for making and sending that note to you. I need to watch out for what I type and say to people. I am also sorry for drawing hate art. I will delete them. I was very immature. I am changing. I need to work on my social skills and say what needs to be said instead of what is unnecessary. I hope that we don't have to hate each other anymore and that we can walk away from the past.


You have been getting very good at art and your attitude. I'm glad to see that you have changed. The only thing that you need to work on is handling the way people draw your character. You make a hate journal on making your character a lesbian and saying that its not your character. You shouldn't do that, because that's the reaction people want. Anyway, I hope we can put this in the past. We both need  to change something. I hope this helps you. It took me time to realize that I overacted to something I sent to you. 




--Shadow5011-- 

Rose's New Official Style
Black was getting old to me. I have seen lots of other characters using black to make their character look edgy. I don't want Rose to be portrayed as edgy. I made the dress blue and shorter because that way Rose can move faster in battles. The flats are blue and a bit different, mainly because I just realized I was doing flats very wrong. Now I do them right.
Her hair is slightly different because I made some of the curls smaller. I think this looks better on her instead of the short, thick curls. I'm glad I made this.

The reason why the gloves are still the same is because of it being a peice of her back-story.
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Rose Meets Amy Rose
Rose time travels to a different part of time where Amy is twelve. In Rose's universe, Amy gets married to Shadow and Sonic gets married to Sally.
So, Rose wonders around and finds Amy. Amy sees that Rose is lost and new around these parts.

Amy: Hi there, I'm Amy Rose. What's your name?
Rose: I'm Rose De. Sommer.
Amy: We both have roses in our names! That's really cool!
Rose: Where....am I? What's the date?
Amy: You're at Station Square. It's May 31, 2003.
Rose: (I am two years old right now).
Amy: Do you want me to show you around?
Rose: That will be nice. (She's cute.....SNAP OUT OF IT!!! SHE'S YOU'RE FRIEND'S MOM!!!!!)
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Rose's Pose
You know how all the Sonic characters have their poses with a circle behind them? I decided to do it too; only different.
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Pride

I AM PROUD

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Dear CobaltPie,


I am sorry for making and sending that note to you. I need to watch out for what I type and say to people. I am also sorry for drawing hate art. I will delete them. I was very immature. I am changing. I need to work on my social skills and say what needs to be said instead of what is unnecessary. I hope that we don't have to hate each other anymore and that we can walk away from the past.


You have been getting very good at art and your attitude. I'm glad to see that you have changed. The only thing that you need to work on is handling the way people draw your character. You make a hate journal on making your character a lesbian and saying that its not your character. You shouldn't do that, because that's the reaction people want. Anyway, I hope we can put this in the past. We both need  to change something. I hope this helps you. It took me time to realize that I overacted to something I sent to you. 




--Shadow5011-- 

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GottaGoBlast Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
I found your DA! :3
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EliseChaosRosetta Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
thx for the watch.
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Issy2610 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much for the watch ^-^ I really appreciate that! And have a nice day~ x3
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DatCrazyCatCritic Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Greetings,

I am sorry CobaltPie was such a bitch to you.
I do not know if you are a fan of hers or not, but she had no right to treat you like that. 

Sadly that is how Cobalt is a arrogant stuck up bitch who thinks she's so much better than everyone because she whores herself and her character all over the internet.

This whole "Evil Twin"  crap, is just her yet again giving more attention to her haters.   As I have been saying for years,  Cobalt really doesn't give 2 fucks about her fans,  or  as she sees them  "Her army of  idiots who will swallow whatever lies she feeds them"  

If I was you, I'd just avoid her....she's not worth anyone's time and she is most certainly no one to look up to.

Again, sorry she was so rude to you :(
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Shadow5011 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Sorry for the late reply. However, you are right. She just made a journal saying "tell me your feelings I won't block you like I did 5 years ago!" I think she might block though.
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TwilightsInferno Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for the fave!!
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Shadow5011 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
I enjoy your pictures. Very well done.
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TwilightsInferno Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much :D
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CoolHaze Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2015
Thanks for the watch :hug: :D
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Shadow5011 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
You are most welcome
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